Thursday, July 26, 2018

Ben's birthday








This week for  writing,  based on a book  hope you enjoy.
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5 comments:

  1. Room 8July 30, 2018 at 7:05 PM

    Charlie, I like how you have tried to add detail to this piece of writing. Try to type carefully and include your punctuation when typing. eg:
    Something was going on in the lounge! I checked to see what was going on. There were shiny things in the lounge blue, mauve, pink and red. - Mrs T

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  2. AnonymousMarch 19, 2019 at 2:43 PM

    I really like your writing

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  3. JohnMarch 19, 2019 at 2:46 PM

    Wow that is so good. You got one of the address on the right point.

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