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Last week we went to Te Tahawai marae. They welcomed us with a powhiri.
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It was a normal shift at the grand hotel for Charlie. The bathrooms might have been cleaner but Charlie had found a lottery ticket in the...
Charlie, I like how you have tried to add detail to this piece of writing. Try to type carefully and include your punctuation when typing. eg:
ReplyDeleteSomething was going on in the lounge! I checked to see what was going on. There were shiny things in the lounge blue, mauve, pink and red. - Mrs T
I really like your writing
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DeleteWow that is so good. You got one of the address on the right point.
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